Feedback on UI’s

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Greetings! I’ve just started making UI’s for my own bakery! What do you guys think? What can I improve on?

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I’m pretty proud of these UI’s! I’ve been thinking of taking commissions for UI’s! How much would be a reasonable price? I think 500 is great. Tell me what you guys think. :heartpulse:

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Wow. I’m impressed. I would say there’s nothing to add.

May i ask how long this took?

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Hmm. I didn’t really set a timer but around 2-3 hours? It wasn’t really the design that took long, it was trying to make everything as neat as I could.

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Wow :open_mouth: Good job :+1:

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Thank you! :smiley: Should I start commissioning for these? 500 robux?

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I really like all the colours and everything matches together so well. Everything is easy to read and they are very visually pleasing. Keep up the awesome work!

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Yes. Definitely start commissioning for your UI’s. I’m sure you will make a really good amount of revenue. I’m not sure how much you should price your UI’s, but i think its worth well over 500 robux.

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Ooh I will! Thank you for the feedback!

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These look really good! I think that if you did a selection of UI’s like this, you could get more than just 500, depending on how much you do, but they look fantastic!

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I dont know the vibe your going for, but in my opinion its a bit too flashy. It genuinely hurts my eyes.

Otherwise its nice. The placement is good, I see that just about everything is round so this is good for the style your going for.

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Wow! I also design UI’s, but I am impressed with yours! Great job, how long did these take?

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Hello,
Overall your UI Design is great, however, I will give you some tips to improve.

First UI

  • There is a grammar error on the first line for worker points. “is” should be replaced by “are” as “worker points” are a plural noun, not a singular noun.
  • You should not use capital letters everywhere. Eye strain is common looking at large writing on a small monitor screen or laptop screen.

Second UI

  • You should include the Robux prices in the UI. Anyone who is looking at the Game passes will not know the prices, therefore people will have to tire themselves checking all the prices one by one.
  • Add product descriptions and names, so people will have a better idea of what they are buying

Have a great day!

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Good advice, I would second it. The only thing I would advise against is adding product descriptions to this same UI, it will become too cluttered. They should do it through a pop up or just leave it off completely and have them look at the description on the site. The name + branding of the product should also be strong enough to give one a good idea of what the item is at a quick glance.

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This took me around two to three hours. :slight_smile:

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Ohhh. What do you think I could’ve changed to make it less flashy?

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Hey! Those UIs are great and very attractive! I would sell them for well over 500 robux, into the thousands, like 1k-3k, as is could be a great and high demanded product for the style and quality! Keep up the great work!

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Hello. Those UIs are fire. Your price is alright. Keep up the good work.

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Don’t improve on anything that amazing!

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Unfortunately, your text color is an issue in your UI, consider darkening the background.

(Want proof? Use the contrast checker.)

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Looks nice to me. I find it noticeable that all the round stickers in the 2nd screen are slightly different size and positioning – one is touching the top of its frame, another is lower and almost touching the button, etc. Most users won’t notice that but clients might :slight_smile:

Agreed with the other user who said text color is an issue, keep in mind people can have very different screens, someone with a cheap device that has low contrast (or just a beam of sunlight hitting their laptop) might struggle to read white on pastel. Besides darkening the background, you could also solve that by giving the font a subtle stroke (I think set via .TextStrokeColor3), for this probably a light-ish grey stroke would work.