Feedback on UI (4 Hours Work)

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#1

Hey everyone,

After learning the basics, I’ve started to create the UI for a fighting/anime inspired game that I’ve been working on. I decided to aim for creating a basic intro/menu UI and even then it took me some time to finish. I think there’s still much more room for improvement that I can’t seem to figure out. If anyone can give me some feedback it’ll be very appreciated. Thanks!

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#2

video is restricted can’t give feedback :slight_smile:

#3

Looks amazing! I love the transitions especially.

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#4

Fixed it… I think? It was unlisted

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#5

I never said it was unlisted… I said it was RESTRICTED. Don’t put the age us over 18 just make it for 13.

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#6

Alright should be working now, thanks for the heads up

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#7

its still restricted. maybe put it as an mp4 not yt vid or images

#8

jxzzify to the rescue (i hope)

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#9

I don’t see it restricted, It shows as a normal youtube video for me.

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#11

yay thx u my savior :slight_smile:

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#12

My parents enabled restricted mode for me.

#13

I’d say that’s pretty good for a beginner
Here are some things that I think could improve:

  • Make the animations quicker/more snappy
  • Maybe change up the font a bit
  • You can use an Image for the title of the game
  • Instead of moving some of the things into/out of frame, you can try either changing the transparency of it or changing the size to 0, 0 then tweening the size.
  • Use some different easingstyles while tweening
  • For the side bar, you can try using an UI Gradient with the transparency so it fades out at the edge

There’s still a lot of room for improvement but you are doing pretty good!

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#14

First of all, I would personally add a tiny bit of more detail to the intro, I would also use a different tween for B4 presents. I love the fade in though and the menu popping out of the side.

Secondly, your UI is colliding with the Roblox menu on the menu UI, I don’t also like the font although that’s my personal preference.

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#15

Thank you I didnt think about using an image for the title

#16

Yeah I’m just going to make everything a little bit smaller so that it doesn’t interfere with the roblox’s UI. I still don’t know too much about the easing styles so that’s why I only used linear, but I’ll try to expand my knowledge. Thanks for the feedback!