[Feedback or Rate] Gfx [Outdated]

-Hi there! I would Show to you a GFX of my character for My portfolio’s showcase …
I would appreciate some Feedbacks from you or some comments about the picture…
Feel Free To check My portfolio : https://devforum.roblox.com/t/open-ardominb-pro-gfx-artist-for-hire/524980
Contact : Discord : Ay-Men xD#7917

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Few issues:

  • Discord logo is too big compared to the text.
  • The font used for the Discord details as well as “Professional GFX artist for hire” is far too… bland compared to the sparkling nature of the rest of the banner.
  • Too much white space. The logo is definitely too isolated from everything else, and so is your character.
  • There shouldn’t be a space before the exclamation mark (!) in “Professional GFX artist for hire !”; should be “for hire!” – understandable error though.

Good effort. Hope to see it improved. :slight_smile:

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