Feedback please Realistic Jungle With Cave Waterfall

Hey guys I want to know some feedback on the Jungle waterfall thing I can’t really think of a good name but i just want some help or sum to make it look better i already have some things that will make it look better but i will wait for you guys suggestions
game : Jungle Cave Waterfall (Showcase) - Roblox

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Looks great, i love the placement of the plants, especially in the second picture, and the lighting is pleasant and fits the theme, it really gives off that rainy,shady forest vibe. Still,the usage of birch trees doesn’t quite fit the theme. You could just delete the texture from the stem.

Your Jungle looks astonishing! I love the way you used the lighting here.

One thing that I think is missing is the grass. Since this is supposed to be a jungle, you should definitely have a lot of grass laying around!

Looks amazing, did you use any blur?

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The jungle you have created looks incredibly realistic with good detail with the wildlife. The terrain looks exceptional and the water systems presents in your images, following Geography, looks naturally carved. The rock formations appear naturally shaped by erosion and the trees have not been placed in a regular pattern making them look naturally grown.

The only suggestion I may give is to have lighter shadows. Some of your images have been very dim due to heavy shadows which may cause strain to one’s eyes.

Looks great, are you using FIB 2.5?

This is well-made! Great job on using terrain as well as rocks to accompany itself to ensure that realism is passed onto your players rather than using parts because that’d be pretty boring to me!

In addition to the helpful ideas above, I’d suggest throwing in some watery sounds, maybe some nature sounds such are birds too if you haven’t already thought about before I assume you have but eh.

Good luck, really appreciate your efforts on this place here!

Looks great! Love how surreal the appearance is! :happy4:
Features I would modify are…

  • Adding lights/brightening the lighting so it doesn’t seem too dark to the point where you can’t see the full potential of the build.
  • Placing a skybox into the game, which can give the build more of a surreal/realistic environment.
  • Making animals or props become present so the build itself doesn’t attack the viewer with just all-natural assets, and nothing to balance it out.

Looks nice! FIB 2.5 really does make games much better.

I love it, this is spectacular! If the map was brighter I could probably tell you more feedback and details but, overall what I can see so far it looks great, just everything looks so vivid! I would change the transparency of the water and make a bit more whiteish. Also add more grass, rocks and try making the skybox more realistic. In conclusion, I love it! I couldn’t tell if it is real or not, anyways keep up the work!