(FEEDBACK) Portal Gate

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#1

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I decided to start building as a hobby and I did this as a first build. What are your toughts on this? What can I do to improve it?

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#7

Sorry about those posts!

Actual feedback:

  1. I think that it’s too monochromatic - the swirls up the columns and on the arch are too hard to see in my opinion, I would suggest changing up some colors to highlight the details you have.
  2. The base of the columns should be wider than the actually columns imo. I suggest you widen the base (see image below).
  3. I suggest you make the skull on the top of the build larger.

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All in all, nice work! Keep it up :upside_down_face:

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#8

Most builders that have experience in it would obviously see the detail done on the portal but I wouldn’t say that 100% of the player base would notice those details unless it’s a different color of some kind to give it a pop on the eyes.

Not saying you should make a drastic change, just slight and minor differences in color could make people notice the details of the gate more.

I personally don’t like how the skulls are put onto the gate. I think other details on that would work better.

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#9

I think it looks pretty good, but the arch looks too big. I would try to make it smaller and elevate the parts I selected with a red circle in the screenshot.
Keep up the good work!

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#10

I think it looks pretty good, but the arch looks too big. I would try to make it smaller and elevate the parts I selected with a red circle in the screenshot.
Keep up the good work!image

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#11

Hey there,
I think this is a great start, however, as other developers mentioned above, I do think that the arch could be a bit smaller in length. In addition, I think you could add some material touch-ups to make it look more vintage and realistic.

As always, thanks for letting us give feedback!

#12

This looks great. How did you make the upper parts?

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#13

I used the Archimedes plugin
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#14

For the design on the arch I mean

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#15

Hello, I think this looks fantastic! It has a lot of detail too.

I would agree with J_oen here, personally if you made a slight change to the color like he mentioned it would be more noticeable.

This is the last piece of criticism I have, as Apexodes says I do agree with him that the arch looks too big.

Other than that its a fantastic build and really detailed. I really like the look of it too. Good job and keep it up! :smile:

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#16

Really good portal, i have only two things for you to improve actually. Make the skulls bigger, it’s more eyecatching, also makes like portal dimension-ish like the minecraft nether portal. Example:

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Keep up with the good work! :+1:

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