This is my first completed build and I was wondering if I could get feedback, especially towards the bookshelf. It looks a bit wonky to me perhaps due to the colors and textures. I didn’t use any meshes, except for the pillow, so everything was built in Roblox Studio. I know it would not be efficient for a game, but that’s not what I’m aiming for currently.
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Thank you for your time and I will appreciate the feedback!
I think there too much of the same white, try using different shade of white. the book color should be less bright, something more pastel or darker would go well with the room, I think the shelf look pretty out of place because of it color. either change the desk into brown or change the shelf into white. other than that it is really good, I love how the build was made in roblox!
This is a good start. I like the use of colors. It gives the room a unique style to it. I also like the books that are placed on the shelves making them have different looks so they won’t blend in with the other objects.
I can see a lot of the books, materials changes a lot consider sticking with the same material the foil material your using doesn’t look that appealing the shelve texture and color looks alright, however maybe try going for a more lighter color to the shelves could improve the design.
Maybe you could have a dark color mixed with a lighter color so it doesn’t look to dull there’s a few objects that could be placed on the walls such as clock, pictures art something to make the walls feel less empty. Otherwise, it looks good.
It looks good but there are a lot of mismatched colors. There is no skirting board, no windowsill etc. I’d suggest trading the fm’ed pillow for a pillow you made? Looks okay other than that
The fastest way to mix-match colour is to combine desaturated colours but left some items saturated to become the eye catcher. Everything’s too white, to the point i can’t differentiate between wall and desk. You might want to make the desk, if you still want to make it white-hued, make it a bit darker (grey). Bed’s back cushion looks way too realistic than the other details: either you make the others as detailed or try to find a subtitute for it, hell, the fastest way is to use the same material as the otehr part of the bed: sand!
This is a very very nice build, as stated in the title there is no colour theme and I believe it could do with some colour on the walls, and less use of the white colour - yes white may be a clean colour but it is very unrealistic to have a mainly white bedroom.
Here are a few suggestions:
Other than that I really do like this set, it is a really dynamic and it shows major potential for you as a developer since this is your first build! Amazing work!
