(FEEDBACK) Sword Shop/Forge

Hi, I’m a new developer to the Dev forum and just want some feedback on some of my builds. This particular build is a somewhat low-poly forge/shop for my upcoming sword game. It is supposed to be on a floating island, and take on a somewhat dark, forge look. Any feedback helps, stuff I can add, stuff I can take away, and stuff I did good on! Thanks Developers!

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Inside View

THANKS FOR ANY FEEDBACK, IT HELPS!

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I’d say it looks really good. Maybe make the trees darker.

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Looks good, I don’t know why one of the NPC’s is facing backwards*. But it looks good nonetheless.

*Screenshot:
Screen Shot 2020-02-27 at 4.33.54 pm

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It looks pretty cool. :+1:

I liked it too much. :smiley:

i like it but is it more cool if you work with background?

this my only word i can for now but still to the best make your build come true

Hello!

I really like the build, It’s a pretty nice theme and setting for a blade shop and the colors are really nice as well.

I only got the found out, like @xXThe_123Xx did before. The npc’s are facing backwards.

Overall It’s good!

Regards,
CrashFacts

I like it. This style of building is not mine to be honest, but if you are creating this for one specific project which is connected with this kind of theme, it is pretty amazing!

  • I don’t know what the bridge has been built for, but I just wanted to recommend you scaling the parts down so it won’t seem like the bridge is flying. I could be wrong of course.

  • The lava stops on the half way and I would recommend you adding a bit of a fog, it helps pretty good in this kind of project.

  • I also recommend making the bridge itself a little bit darker.

  • And of course, add some more details. Some crystals maybe or something that is going to make this island even better!

In the game the one facing that “backwards” is animated, and hitting the Anvil. And the one facing forwards is waving! Just clearing that up. Thanks for the feedback really appreciate it!

Okay, thanks will do! for sure

This build is part of a large floating island build. The bridge is to connect this to the main island. Also thanks for the awesome ideas will definitely add some sort of crystals, and play around with fog!

It looks great but honestly, you can brighten it up and add components of that dark grey color instead of having an all grey island.

It’s stunning. It reflects dark forests. You can recolor the trees black, and add a nighttime scheme to make it spookier.

It looks really good, you should maybe add a dark skybox? It would make it feel better I think

Maybe add some big chains going up into the sky near it

Thanks, the game will probably take place in the night, and also that was just the forge, not any of the other stuff