FeedBack) WareHouse for a murder mystery type game

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Hey guys I just wanted know what I can do better on for a map I made for a murder mystery type game.

  1. What do you think of it?
  2. What flaws do you see?
  3. What can I do to improve it?

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Thank you!

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It’s very dark, and hard to see what’s there. I recommend adding little lights around, that just make it a tad brighter.

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I like it but here are some things I’d add or remove. Feel free to take it as you’d like, from John.

  • I’d remove the rounded ness of the roof.
  • Add rays/beams from the light.
  • Make is less dark instead have like dark corners if you’re looking for a place to hide.
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Thank you. I will do that right now!

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It has a cool feel. The walls seem a bit bland tho. It’s very dark, I would brighten it up a little bit, but keep some spots darker, for hiding. Other than that it is good for a Murder Mystery game!

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I really like the map. The lighting is nice,the building is nice as well :slight_smile:

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Thank you! Thanks for the feedback!

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Thank you for the feedback! It helps alot!

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Looks really nice and detailed! I hope to see more of this kind of thing from you in the future! :slight_smile:

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Also the color contrast on the lighting.

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The word “alot” is normally miss spelled it’s correctly spelled as “a lot”.

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Thanks for that to it really helps “a lot” For real though thanks!

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It’s slightly too dark but it fits the atmosphere well. You might also want to use some textures to enhance the details a bit. However the objects look pretty good, fantastic job from you!

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You can’t really see it, the lights dont far enough. Can you provide a game link?

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Yeah, I think I did. Anyways, this build could use lights.

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The lighting needs a lot of work, so we can actually see what’s in the screenshots rather than it being super dark, could you also provide us with a game link this will help a lot, to get the feedback you’re looking for.

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Add textures!
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Yeah, a lot of the map is very dark.

If someone’s trying to get away from a murderer, they’ll just walk into a wall or something since they cant see anything.

Everything else looks alright to me!

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It’s a bit dark. I can barely see what’s inside the map. :sweat_smile:

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Yeah I get that i just fixed the lighting a little bit and now its brighter! Ill add the photo