Ok so this is my second time that I have made a logo. I want some feedback!
(nemuri means sleep)
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It’s nice, but the box around the Z throws it off.
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Ok! i was thinking the same thing. I did it to stick to the theme
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Should I add anything else?
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I think it looks great, only thing that would had to be done is maybe some light shading on the white borders and thats it
I honestly can’t rate it due to the watermark. But I can still kinda see it only that the watermark distracts me. 8/10!
thanks! I will upload another version with a smaller watermark.
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Thx
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It looks better
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I’m not an artist but I think it looks really cool. Neat stuff!
I wouldn’t worry about stuff being stolen here, it’s private after all.
Much better than your previous attempt! I love the improvement you’ve made in such short time.
The white boxes on the Zs strain the eyes. 2D single letters with white backgrounds don’t go well together. Other than that, it looks good for a logo. Your skill will continue to improve through practice. 
Keep it up!
The logo is cleaner and more simple but the z’s stand out too much, and what if the night cap was covering the letter N? 
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That would be SO MUCH better!
thats a great idea, I wanted to make the cap bigger anyways
thanks for all of the good critiques
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