Feedbacks on my first ever cartoony logo!

Hello there, dear forum members! I recently made my first ever cartoony logo and I would like some feedbacks on it. Feel free to say whatever you think, about it; the choices of the colors, the font, how can I improve it, etc!

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Pretty good for a first cartoony logo but I would take out the black lines above the a in fall. I would also add a render or a background of some sort. The gadients and the font is not the best choice but it completely depends on what this logo is for. Hope this helps :slight_smile:

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Maybe add a background, perhaps a part of the game? Also the thin, black layer of text behind the white border looks… odd. Try to remove that, if it was intentional.

Example:
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