Feedbacks On My First Obby Game

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Hello, I made my first obby game and I need some feedbacks on it.
This game includes 9 type of obbys, which is randomly placed like this:

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And When You finish this obby; It will teleport to start of obby, and game will regererate the obby.

This game is removed and new game will overwrited soon. Sorry!

And I need some feedbacks for this game to improve my game.
What you think? What can be added into this game?

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Well, I do not know what to say. There isn’t really much to say, it is only just an obby. But good job, I know how tedious it can be to position the parts properly. So good job!

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Looks pretty cool. I recommend adding a lobby so when a player joins they’ll be in a room. I also recommend adding a stage counter. Maybe add checkpoints so players can know what stage they’re on? I made an obby myself so I have some experience. Really cool so far! Keep up the good work!

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Thanks for your reply! This game have checkpoints,but stage counter is pretty good idea. I’ll implement these soon!

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Its really cool. Maybe you can add an sky or making a themed obby but for the moment this is good. Only one thing, be careful with the copyright and that Super Mario music

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Sorry for all, but game is closed before to test data stores. Now I re-opened game to test new features!

What Things Added?

  • Coin system, that means every time you passed an obby you get 5 coins.

  • Trails! You can buy and use 7 different types of trails if you want!

  • A mini lobby,

  • Small counter, that counter shows how many obbys left, deaths and collected coins (Idea of @About_Dev)

  • Remade obbys, now this game have nearly 15-20 obbys and every obby has a random color! (like Tower Of Hell, Idea by @spideyalvaro999 for themes)

  • And yep, I removed Super Mario Music and I added new songs!

But for now, I opened this game for computers only.
And I will rescale gui soon.

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Nice, I’ll make sure to check it out soon!

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I added new things again!

  • I added music system, which you can play a song for 600 coins.
    And here is the gui:
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    And you notice, you cannot play every music.
How this works?
  • First you need a music id from roblox,
  • Then you submit your music id into “Insert Music Id Here…” area and click “Send” button.
  • Song will loaded and song will checked if is shorter than 15 seconds,
  • If song isn’t short, song will play for 5 seconds for loudness testing,
  • If your song is passed trough checking system, you need to pay 600 coins.
  • And system Plays your music!
  • I dropped 5 coins to 2 coins every single obby, but when to made it to end you get extra 50 coins!
  • I fixed some bugs.

  • And you can choose Gamemode!

    Game have 3 types of gamemodes as listed below:

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I Hope if you liked!

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I simply love obbies, and I think you have done an amazing job on your first obby game.

My feedback on your first obby game is that you need to show in your own way why your obby is unique, why people should play your obby instead of others.

For a more enchanted experience I’d say add a sky, add more decorations etc.
Great job, and keep creating.

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I encountered A glitch where (playing by myself) I selected hardcore and after generating the winners were selected immediatley.

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Thanks for report, I fixed now, It shouldn’t select the winners when obby is generated.

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Sorry for all, but I will delete this game, because I tried to make different obbys but I got bored. Still, I learned things like publishing game, making products, datastores… etc.

Anyway thanks for all for who played this game, I will make another game soon!

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