Finished my Low-Poly type house, opinions?

Hi, I’m back with my finished Low-Poly type house! Please rate it and give me suggestions to improve or just your opinion on it. This is probably my first Low-Poly type build, aside from the car in my Introduction/Portfolio thing.

The House



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Again, please give me your opinions. Thanks!

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The purple doesn’t match with the blue.

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Hm, I thought it might look good together. I’ll change the color, any suggestions for a replacement?

I have no idea what would look good.

Oh, ok thanks for the feedback though! I’ll try grey.

I feel your color choices are too bright and flashy.
Try to give it more of a realistic color.

For example, making the blue a little lighter and making the roof black.

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Ok, I’ll do that. Thanks for the Feedback!

Do you think this looks better? Personally I think it does, good advice!

Change the color of the chimney, and remove the handle on the door, thats just imo.

Ok, thanks for your opinion! I’ll take it into consideration to ask you in the future.

Try making the frames of the window smaller.
The window at the bottom looks stretched and not natural.
Make the door smooth plastic.
Adjust the windows and doors so they don’t bulge out of the house.

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Ok I’ll try doing that then.Thanks

I’ll try doing that then, thanks.

What color do you suggest making the chimney?

Ok these are the updates I’ve made to the house so far, @SchwarzWalde I’m not sure what color to change the chimney to

You’re focussing a tad bit too hard on colour when the problem is the constitution of the build. The window frames are too blocky, the roof is one-sided, and the chimney is too small. The door has no detail whatsoever – as in, it lacks a frame and a handle. Yes, the colour is slightly odd inasmuch that everything seems way too colourful, but I think that should be a secondary concern to a novice builder.

Instead of jumping in the deep end trying to build a perfect “low-poly” house, focus on objectivity. Subjectivity comes later.

Create, to the best of your ability, a detailed door or a table for example. First you must master detail before you master the art of simplicity.

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Ok, I’ll take all that into consideration as I continue to update the build.

You should try downloading the Plug-in F3X. That’s how I started building, I used it in-game every day. I’ll show you how to download a plugin

Steps to download F3X


Click on PLUGINS ^

Click Manage Plugins ^


Find Plugin

Search F3X, then Bestselling. Then download it!

Here’s the link if you can’t find it!

Link for Plug-in

Building Tools by F3X (Plugin) - Roblox

And, here’s the link for the In-game Model! you can use F3X in game

Link for In-game tool model

Building Tools by F3X - Roblox

And when building low poly, the only 2 materials you should use are Smooth Plastic and Neon. Here’s an example that I’ve made using neon and smooth plastic

My build example

This is one of my builds, its not that good but it may be helpful

Finally, I suggest making the base of the house a shade of blue like this:

Steel Blue

And the chimney:

Storm Blue

Or

Cloudy grey

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The color of the roof is dull (The roof is also too flat). Also, the windows are protruding too much. The window on the bottom looks like it got stretched, the chimney could be thicker too and should be longer. Focus on the detail of the building first, like improving the windows and door then think of the color scheme.

Here’s an idea for a low-poly;
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It’s pretty basic, but you could use as a reference.

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(I meant to reply to Schwarz)Ok I’ll think about all that as I continue. @z4ayn I’ll try making the windows less bulgy and fixing the roof.