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The gif was really fast so it was pretty hard to see what you’ve made 
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Click the gif, you can see it again
I think the words are a bit slow, but otherwise, looks nice!
I know that, but still, it’s really hard to see it.
The animation looks a bit slow to me.
Edit: It wasn’t fully loaded, the text is slow though.
Nice job! I don’t have any complaints, but I recommend making the “i” capital. It s person or character’s name right? another thing is that the guys head moved super quick! maybe tone it down?
Happy Building,
FusionFast X 
It’s the guy’s username, so that wouldn’t make any sense.
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The arm movement feels very unnatural and i don’t really know what it’s supposed to be.
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It’s way too fast and the character’s movement are kinda of… strange
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it’s a username so it’s meant to be lowercase aha
It’s a good effort, but the animation is a little not smooth lol. The ice k1ng part is a little over dramatic.
the lighting is great! the animation however in my opinion doesn’t make sense the way you’re avatar moves isn’t something I understand quite much other than that, no complaints. Love it!
For a first animation, it’s not that bad. One critique i have of it is that the text at the end goes almost 3x the length of the animation itself, so i’d make it faster. Keep on trying and improving!
That is wonderful for a first animation! Maybe fix the text speed and make it faster as well.
Wonderful Start!
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