This is my first low poly build and would like some feedback I feel like it is missing something.
Here is the build
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Wow this looks really cool and detailed. Good work!
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Thank you. It took me a lot if time
Hi there! Great build! I would suggest making your photo less blurrier, It kinda makes it hard to see. Also, feel free to make the colors more brighter and colorful. :))
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Looking at it again I see what you mean by it being a little to blurry. Also thanks for the suggestions
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Looks very nice!
The only thing that had stuck out to me were the pine trees. They seem a bit simple compared to all the other objects. The trunk for example is a perfect cylinder, where I suggest it be a little bit of a cone. The triangle-cones for the pine leaves also seems a bit too smooth.
That was the only thing I could think of, very nicely created.
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Love the concept! I think for a first build this is very good, but just a few points to touch up on.
Firstly, the islands are all the same, just scaled down. Try to make them different from each other if possible.
Secondly, the pine trees look a little odd. I would suggest making the trunk much smaller, and then go back into Blender, C4D, whatever you use and work with the vertices of the cones. Try rounding them off, and see what that does.
For you first low poly build however, I think it’s amazing! Can’t wait to see what you make in the future.
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That looks really good! Wish there wasn’t a lot of light.
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For your first ever low poly build there are super nice, and definitely look neat.
The map in my opinion seems a bit empty I would definitely add different variety of trees and possibly more other types of vegetation you could add the extra details to it to cover up the empty spots it won’t hurt to add different details on it instead of having just trees and rocks try adding logs, smaller rocks, flowers, mushrooms, etc. That’s if you want to add it to your build. Maybe try making the water more brighter instead of having a darker color.
If you plan to add more detail to your map it would make the map feel less empty. Overall, it’s very well made I do hope you keep improving and practicing to create even more detailed builds.
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Yes the pine trees are too smooth but it was all I could think of to fill in the empty space.
Thank you for your suggestion
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I think I will go back into blender and Play with the Pine trees a little and maybe make some more islands
Thank you for the suggestion.
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Thank you for the feedback. I think I may have put too much lighting
Hey, that’s really dope! My only suggestion is that the floating island terrain contrasts a lot against the style of the rest of the build. It feels like the floating islands are a lot more detailed, or have a higher trig count. It throws the build off a bit because it kind of feels like you designed the main island first and then just threw in 3 floating islands as a second thought.
Besides the three floating islands though, the rest of the build is fantastic. Love the terrain. 
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Thank you for you feedback.
It is pretty empty an I will defiantly add more vegetation and maybe make a more variety of trees
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I will defiantly improve the amount of time put into each build
Thank you for your suggestion
Lookin’ good my dude! I recommend this guy for projects!
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Nice build, like the use of colors maybe it could use some houses!
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it looks nice, but it seems a bit too bright and the contrast was slided too far
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Looks really nice! The pine trees look more high poly than low poly. But overall really nicely done a first time!
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