Hi, this is my ui that shows up when u first play the game want to know if i need any improvements
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Looks nice. Maybe try adding some more colours, though.
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I know that if a player even glances at that wall of text, they will ignore it. Remove everything and keep the middle 3 main objectives. Keep it simple and most importantly, clean.
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should i make it bold or nahhh??? char limit limit haha
also i made it so they need to wait 10 secs before proceeding
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Try making it so that the Okay! Button appears after a couple seconds so that people are more likely to read the thing
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as stated earlier it makes them wait 10 seconds before they can exit out thanks tho
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I am an absolute idiot. I apologize for my inane dribble of stupidity
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One thing I would add (besides the already commented on corrections 
) is to contrast the “Okay” button. Whether it be outlining the button, or changing the colors to be even lighter (or both), it needs a little more pop!
The body text (“Kill players for coins”, etc.) should have some more differentiation from the title. Whether it be bolding the title more, or thinning the text, size just isn’t enough to seperate texts.
Even if you didnt do these, it looks just fine!
please take my feedback lightly. even your original design would work just fine but i still wanted to highlight some parts
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maintain proper grammar and punctuation (“either your on” → “either you’re on”; We wont" → “We won’t”)
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try to sound more inviting; the semi-bold Red “We wont bother you again so please read it” is pretty menacing/forcing especially since there’s only 2 listed features. maybe a yellow “Have fun!” would work better
also something like “Engage with our competitive community!” is probably better than saying your community is toxic
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try using different shades & sizing to improve readability
The red text is changed to green and says have fun playing! After the 10 second countdown is completed
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