Forest obby building feedback

Hello i would want some feedback about the buildings of my new update on my game.
images:
(note: the lighting is changed with the zoneplus module so don’t mind if the lighting is a little bad)
Forest first parts:

Narrow part of the river:

Introductory cave to the next zone:

Zone 2:

Zone 3 first part:

Zone 3 second part:

Rebirth zone (behind that house there’s a “coming soon” portal)

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This forest obby build is INSANELY GOOD! Great job on it! The entire atmosphere and look of the obby build is very unique for Roblox, with the lighting and fog! How long did this take to make? I rate this 9/10!

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Thanks for your great words on it! This took around 1.5 days to make, but I still need to fix some things and add decoration

Everything looks flawless. I cannot wait to see the final product!

My only concern is whether it’s just a quirk of Roblox Studio or if the “Rebirth” GUI text is genuinely too large and taking up an unreasonable amount of screen space.

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I put it really big because I stopped trusting on players to understand basic things (like in this case, rebirth), since (no offense), but many times it has happened to me that some players look like they are blind and just walk flawless where to go and then leave the game, sometimes even leaving some dislikes. Thanks for the feedback also, love you guys are liking my builds!

Hey, the building looks insanely good, do you have any ui or mechanics you can show us?

You should also focus on marketing asap.

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Thanks for liking my building! About showing the ui or mechanics, i’ll make a post about my game update when it is released, i’ll show them there. I’m really close to finishing it, I just need decoration on some zones of the forest and more on the caves

also, the trees are free models, but the things that matter is how you place them and how good looks the final product, right?

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Ok this Build is really good and I like the build a lot. I love the style but it is a bit confusing that it is low-poly and stud style. Another concern is the rebirth I read the comments even though you want it big for people to see but I think the ui can get a lot of improvement if you would like I can do it for you also.

thanks for the good feedback! I could try making the mountains block shaped instead of that low poly style. Also thanks for the offer, but i will improve that rebirth thingy tomorrow maybe making it into a surface gui.

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Free models are fine as long as:

  • They are optimized
  • They are well placed like you mentioned
  • They Do not have any viruses (Scripts inside)

You should be pretty careful about viruses!

And also, you should make your gui looks like, if you have a bad gui, it will ruin the first impression.

And finally, start building a community. Start marketing your game to get a community.