Hey! I am trying to make a futuristic hub and I need feedback. I am demanding criticism so please don’t hold back on your feedback! Here is the hub! You may have seen this before because my friend posted my build asking for feedback and the post got taken down.
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Honestly It looks pretty cool but too much Neon tires
the eye.
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There isn’t really anything to change here. You could try using Roblox’s ‘Lighting’ tab in the workspace and mess around with skyboxes, blur, etc.
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Looks like mass effect 3 but it doesn’t have that pop that most games have so I recommend using textures such as metal and others that aren’t used as much as smooth plastic. Also don’t hesitate to use pictures from video games like I mentioned (mass effect, halo, etc.) and use that to get an idea from what you want in it. I recomend looking at futuristic space stations also.
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Will do! Thank you for the feedback.
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Alright! Will do. Thank you for the feedback!
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Looks good the white neon makes it more futuristic the lighting is nice and nothing I see I think you should change over all great work.
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Very nice lookin. However, as said, try to play with roblox’s lighting and possibly try to use wedges to smoothen it. Also, no idea how experienced you are but, I would suggest giving it more finite details (like some circuit board pattern on walls or something) to create a more futuristic atmosphere. All from me at the moment, as far as I can tell, this is fantastic.
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Thank you for the feedback! I am a ok builder.
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The walls are a bit flat and thin, I feel. Try to put some metal braces along the wall to give the structure a bit more believable form.
Also, try to ease up on the neon a tiny bit.
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