Please watch the video and give me feedback
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Heavily, heavily entertaining. Good video. To be honest, you could work on your tone a little bit, like enthusiasm, but otherwise. Well done. (not sure roblox will like the cursing)
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Yeah at the end I was saying the video was a mess cause it is. My next video I am going to plan out more instead of just diving in head first. I’m glad you enjoyed it though!
why at the end do you say (Ha ha funni censor)
also funni video
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where did you get the meme videos?
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This is really good! As Ben said, you might want to focus on speaking with a bit more enthusiasm, you could even just increase your volume a bit occasionally to make it sound like you’re speaking louder. You might want to tone down the jokes when covering the technical side so people who are invested in that can see/hear it easier. My friend has devlogs that are much more laid back and I prefer them since they’re also more technical and are more focused on the process of development. You could also maybe swap the music during the parts where you talk about the code / turn down the volume during these parts. I really like it overall, hope you continue!
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