Came up with a cool game concept and decided to make a mock-up logo for it. Thoughts?
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Looks really cool! However, the green line thing looks weird in it.
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Oh, that was to represent the land players would battle on. Perhaps I didn’t make the dirt color bright enough to be noticed?
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Yeah I just noticed the dirt underneath so maybe try to make it pop out a bit more.
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Everything looks great
First of all, I don’t think I see any background colour behind all of the text and the picture
And else, ofc, clear the watermark
I’m not too sure if I’d want to clear the watermark… 
Thanks, though!
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Haha, might want to clear the watermark, otherwise it looks as though you took a free image off the search bar (as there would still be a watermark on the game logo), overall, very neat job! Best of luck!
I think this looks awesome, as the other have stated maybe having the ground a bit more noticeable. I’d even just take a photo of an in-game area in the map and remove the ground entirely and layer the logo on top. [Could easily layer it in the future for future updates, etc etc]. Overall it’s clean and looks good 
There’s a watermark so people don’t steal their work. If they removed it, theres a chance somebody could use it without permission.
Eventually someone is going to take his logo without his permission if the game in question becomes popular enough, so unless he uses the watermarked copy as the game thumbnail, a watermarked version here won’t matter.
@ZurichBT Btw, the logo looks nice, gives me wipeout vibes and I like that. However, the grass and what I assume to be dirt looks a little off to me, especially if it’s going to remain on a gray background
They both probably meant to clear the watermark when using it for real
The logo overall looks fantastic I love it. My only criticism is that the dirt is the only non curved item besides letters and it really throws it off for me, as well as making slightly darker maybe. Overall looks great!
I realize that, I just don’t think it would be best for them to keep it when using the game logo for their actual game (as then it seems like they stole someone else’s watermarked work)
Yeah, obviously they’d remove it when they use it for their icon, but when they put it on devforum, they’ll leave it watermarked so people can’t steal the nice and HQ icon.
It’s possible to take them from Roblox directly when they upload it but it changes the image size to 150x150.
I appreciate the kind comments. I do agree that the grass and dirt looks out-of-place, but I am having trouble figuring out a replacement for them with all the blank space that would serve as the byproduct. Perhaps you could have any ideas as to a solution?
You could’ve just made a big diagonal watermark across the icon?
Besides that, it looks great. What is the red bar anyway?
Why not put your name on the bottom instead of using the watermark. Would remove the issue with the weird watermark, out of place dirt and credit, beside’s making it harder for those dang copy-ers.
The red bar is there purely for style. Logos don’t have health bars FYI. Besides that, this is probably the first time I have ever received more criticism on my watermark rather than my work…
Nice. I see you put a watermark. Will the watermark be on the actual icon, or no?