Game Needs Feedback (CLOSED)

Hey everyone!

I’ve been working on this game for a while now and finally feel like I’ve reached an MVP. I’ve already gotten some feedback on the thumbnails, and I’d love to hear what you all think about everything else too!

A bit of context: I’m primarily a scripter, not a builder or UI designer :sob: so this is actually my first real attempt at building out a map. Feedback on the building/UI side would be especially appreciated, but I’m open to anything!

Here’s the link: GAME CLOSED.
(16+ :confused:)

Thanks so much for taking the time to check it out — really appreciate it. Have a good one!

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hi, game is cool, as is its idea, but there are some flaws.:

  1. tutorial is unclear, there is no navigation by the type of arrows or the line where to go, I figured out what to do using the poke method myself.
  2. desks are not united in a Union.
  3. confusing thing is that in order to pull the lever, you need to hold down the button every time instead of pressing it once, so each time a long animation of knocking out the key is opened to this.

overall, i like your game, but it feels like something is missing, i hope you finish the game because it’s good. >_o

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Thanks so much dude! I always felt something was missing as well. I keep feeling like maybe it’s the map or maybe the gameplay. I was thinking about adding arrows to the tutorial, just never really made them before so I didn’t want to try to learn :sob: but I will today. I will also make sure to adjust the other things you said! Thanks again!

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Made it one mesh. I also removed the hold time for rolling!

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Anchor your mesh.

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Your icons layers over the top ui, if thats intended.

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Oh shoot, thank you so much! The icons layer over, but I do not know how to fix it. I have clip descendants on but it does not work. I am looking right now! Thank you for testing.

Just anchored them. Looking at the ui

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And maybe add borders.

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Will do, thank you all for this valuable feedback!!!

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Make sure to reset the keyboard and stuff after a player leaves.

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Oh. I thought I did. Hmm I will fix that! I must have stopped doing that when I was fixing the keyboard stuff. Thank you for letting me know about this!

Let the red keys be affected by cash multiplier too, it only gives you 1 cash.

It does, but because it rounds down it would give you 1 until you have 2x or more multiplier.

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I fixed the board removal and added a border. I am working on some sort of loading screen, because there is a small second before you teleport to your base! Thank you for helping me!!

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Just finished the loading screen. Looks kinda bland, but works!

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