Here is some cool stuff I made for “Second Chance”!
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Tips/corrections are welcome. Thanks for viewing!
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looks great but outlines dont match fov doesn’t match for the ones at the bottom, it just looks kinda weird with the lighting and posing and clothingn choices, and the background lighting and glow does not match the character lighting or glow and that makes it feel ‘off’.
which outlines
if youre talking about the white outlines for the logos on the bottom arent actually apart of the logos, they are just there as a sort of “frame” in which im talking about these ones
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- The lighting color should be the same color as the background color
- Speaking of lighting, you need rim lighting, and also lighting should be coming from all directions (your "shadow’ should be colored)
- You need more roughness and a teeny bit of metallicness for the material
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oh, so the outlines on the character aren’t part of it either?
looks pretty good, fits the style.
although i’d recommend to fix the heads on some of the picture because they look a bit off.
its kinda a cafe style, they mostly look like that tbh.
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yeah they wanted it to be like that lol
i’ll try to make the lighting a lil more thicker but i cant do anything really about the texture bcs im just using a rig, i will look for a tutorial on rim lighting as well
thanks!
the outlines on the char are apart of it, without it imo it kinda doesnt look natural
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I can’t really think of anything else besides the girl with the green background which looks as if her head is sinking into her torso. Perhaps lift the head up a bit? Besides that everything looks clean, amazing job!
Edit: Oh and btw, make sure to add your watermark next time so no one steals your work.
Don’t touch the textures, change the material in the shading tab. There’s a bsdf shader and you can change roughness and metallic
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the “c” is my watermark haha
also i’ll try making heads look natural next time
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