Give me feedback and tell me things I could edit in/ Improve upon

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I think the art looks amazing and that all of the colors you used really went well together! Could you reply to my post with an explanation of the look/final product you were going for? I think this would help me give more helpful feedback. Thanks.

I recommend you work on the lighting.

There wasn’t a set goal I just wanted to make a knight type guy walking through a dungeon.

This is great but considering it’s a cave, it should be dark and not so lit-up.

You should’ve added torches and made te cave dark - as well as adding texture to the rock. You can learn how to do textures here

This is a rough sketch of what I mean (the orange glow is highlighting where an orange point light should be added)

The orange around the character are places where you should highlight in photoshop to give it an overall effect.

Sorry for the bad photoshop, it’s hard when you don’t have the original photo layers

I see - well, for one thing I do agree with @Lava_Creeper03 about your lighting. Although the cave seems to be lit up, I don’t see the presence of any light sources. If you want to keep the cave lit up just a bit, I’d suggest adding visible torches. The lantern the knight is holding couldn’t light up the entire cave in reality, so just keep that in mind.

Otherwise, the color theme was really well picked out! Good job!

I do have torches, I plan on moving them down farther, thank you for the feedback.