Give me feedback on my axe

This my second original model ever and i’ve been learning for only a month and a half. All made in blender. What is good what is bad etc… all feedback is welcome!!!

After the advice i turned on denoising, added a sun light, upped the power of the hdr using a math node, and made it so that the rings are no longer clipping. Here is the new product

Ps I watched blender gurus tutorial on optimizing renders and the render time went down by about 10 seconds!!!

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Oooo I like it! The small details with the handle & welds along with it add a nice touch! Maybe you could implement a sunbeam reflection for the axe blade? Overall though, nice job making it!

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Some of the rings around the handle are clipping through the handle, because they are a little too far away from the handle. Try centering them, unless it was intentional.

And, the handle should maybe be a little smaller, like a hair smaller. Otherwise it’s looking nice.

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I tried but since I’m using a hdr it won’t work. A few tweaks of some setting should eventually do it though!!

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Oops I didn’t notice. Thanks :+1:

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This looks amazing for only a month and a half! The head looks great, my only critique is the handle. I can’t tell if it’s the lighting or the texture but it looks 2D, I would add some tapering on one end or some scratches. I can see you tried to add some detail to the handle and some of it looks good, however most of it is clipping or floating my recommendation is to focus on the object while you are learning then work on adding detail latter on.

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looks very good! i like the used look you gave it, try to fix the black lines though, otherwise 10/10

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