Gun Shop Creation give me your opinion

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About Me

Hi developer, I introduce myself my name is Thoomas I am 15 years old I am a builder and modeler, I can use blender etc. I worked in several groups I worked in Nortwood prison a group with more than 10K members I worked in south’s mano and in other’s larges group’s. Right now, I’m creating a café and developing other mano.

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I want to know your opinions on my work

So I have build a gun shop for someone and I wan’t know
What I have to change or add is good or not tell me everything I want to know! :slight_smile:

Thanks for reading! :slight_smile:

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The font seems a little too ‘happy’ for a gun shop. Try something more serious. The shop itself looks a little boring. You could add model guns on showcase behind the counter.

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Is this even finished yet? The interior is just empty and the exterior looks way too bland. The font in the signs doesn’t look fitting either. If you don’t know what more to add, I suggest you make something along the lines of the gun shops in Jailbreak
https://www.roblox.com/games/606849621/Jailbreak

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Thank you for ur opinion I will apply them.