Hello, I’m somewhat new to building and I was wondering if I could get feedback for the first game I have made.
Game: home (getting work on) - Roblox
I hope everyone helps me if there are any bugs or glitching in the game.
Thank you for reading. 
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The map is well done and the atmosphere is scary,being your first game I understand that is difficult to script a more complicated game,it looks like you have the potential to make a good game.I think that in the time this game will become something interesting to play
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Omg thank u I’m happy to hear that u like it
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I decided to give your game a go.
Upon joining i like the overall design and layout of the place from the games image; looks neat. Love that abandoned feel it has, It looks to be a good build that can become a game very soon.
First thoughts in-game; the layout of the mountains and house i think look alright maybe try expanding the land a bit more so players could explore instead of staying in a tight area (some music or nature sounds could possibly add a bit more to your map). I see the map is quite empty as it’s just placed with a lot of mountains doesn’t look too appealing, but adding a few trees or ground foliage could improve it.
If this is a somewhat abandoned design place a few broken objects on the ground like a shattered window, I myself think some lighting place on the house could look good. The waterfall seems to be coming out of nowhere. Maybe place a little ledge, and rocks surrounding it where the water would come off of the mountain. However it’s a good start.
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Thank u I keep this in mind and talk with a few of my devs and work with it and see what I could used/ make with the feedback u gave me
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Actually i like it, maybe you can make the land around the house a bit bigger.
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TTTmc should we add the new atmospshere to the game???
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