hi im theroblox i have been working on a chart obby, we are 4 pepole creating the game and i would like your oppinion the music i know is good but is stressful
https://www.roblox.com/games/6811465735/Dalb-Chart-Obby?refPageId=3cbb1149-28f3-420d-a4a6-db2436f1b9d4
thanks
P.S yesterday 2 streamers play the game and i won 136 robux
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The character is r15… Change it to r6 animation, it’s literally the most important thing when making a obby.
Also the stages are pretty long, please fix that; i recommend you to make more stages, like 10-15 stages per difficulty.
The game has a lot to improve, in my opinion, but it’s a good start, keep up the good work.
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I like your game but it has many problems, which are:
1. Proper name, a obby game like yours should be named “Dalb’s Difficulty Chart Obby”
2. Building, it’s amateur building with nothing special, no textures, no themes, no nothing, too plain for someone to want to keep playing it
3. Music choice, the music you currently have is great, but I feel like every new difficulty should have a new music, like other difficulty charts
4. The gameplay, it’s absolute trash (I am sorry for being harsh, but it really is), there’s nothing fun to the stages, just very boring to play, and would make a regular player to play another game due to the gameplay being boring
5.Faster reset or a r button that, when pressed, would quickly teleport/reset the character to the spawn point
In my opinion, the biggest problem in this game is the design. When you first enter the game, the lobby doesn’t look too bad but it feels kinda empty. Most of the stages don’t look appealing and they don’t make you want to play. You can improve the design by:
1. Using different shapes
2. Adding some textures or decoration
But also the gameplay could be a lot better. You can try:
1. Making creative and unique jumps or mechanics, like the pad that makes you jump
2. Avoiding repetition, because it just makes it boring to play.
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