https://www.roblox.com/games/4828821223/The-Return-20-Progress
So my intro is a bit straightforward for a horror game, like there’s a loading screen then some few introductions about the game then you just jump into the game right after. I feel like my game is rushed, I don’t really have much ideas for an intro, but can you guys suggest some? or maybe give me some references?
It looks quite well, however one thing that I highly suggest you remove is the top bar.
It looks more pleasing in horror games and you get extra pixels at the top of your screen to work with.
Local Script and put it into a Starter GUI
wait()
game.Players.LocalPlayer:WaitForChild("PlayerGui"):SetTopbarTransparency(1)
No, I decided to make the topbar not transparent cause I use alot of black screens and I dont wanna adjust all of them plus I also have other guis that ill have to rework.
All good, your game looks very well made. Good luck!