Hey guys, I need a lot of help with ideas and opinions about my game, I’m out of creativity
The game is an RPG.
What can I add on it?
Game:✨⚔️ A Journey Of Heroes ⚔️✨ [RELEASE] - Roblox
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It seems a little empty right now, its obvious its in its early stages, but theres not really much to do. Apart from looking at the map I couldn’t find anything else to do. I will say though I liked the style a lot, the controls were nice and the scenery was really beautiful. The main thing the game lacks is events, plot… a gameplay in general, there’s not much to do yet. Last thing I wanna add is maybe change the thumbnails. I loved the square one, the one you see before opening the game, the art with the two swords but the screenshots from the game you put that show up when you’re about to hit play are also kinda empty.
The main thing you're game is lacking is stuff to do as well as small decorations because there's a ton of empty open space which makes the game look unfinished.
Overall though I believe it has potential to become successful.
Edit: One thing I also noticed is that the text in the loading screen wasn’t English (i think it was spanish?) so I wasn’t sure what to press cause I don’t speak that language but I kinda figured it out. It would be best to originally make the game in English and let roblox auto-translate it to other languages so that it appeals to more people and has a larger audience market.
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There are really a lot of things left for me to add to it, you helped me a lot by telling me what’s missing from it that I didn’t see.
Thank you for your review of the game!
The text was brazilian i forgot to change
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I love the overall athmosphere of the game, it feels kinda cozy while still giving off that adventureous vibe!
One little neat feature I noticed was how the playing song behaves once the player opens the game menu. Would you mind telling me how you achieved this? As I am actually working on a similar themed game!
Btw, the stair steps when you walk into the village aren’t really uniform; every step has another shape.
Nice project, keep adding stuff and features so more people will start playing your game for longer!
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I think your game is nice and there isn’t much for me to day (especially with it in its early phases) but make sure your Ui sizes are consistent and fit the way you like on all devices:
Edit: After playing a bit longer I noticed some things don’t quite work for mobile such as your dialogue system. Either I’d get that fixed or just make your game accessible to PC users only.
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Thanks for you feedback!
Its really helped me.
Here is the model of the blackout:
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I will fix it!
Thanks for you feedback!
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Q to interact with items?!! This should be illegal!
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It was supposed to be “F” for interacting with items 
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