I would recommend first, fixing the capitalization spelling and grammar mistakes. This is literally the first thing you should look out for to sound more professional. It really helps attract people.
Why don’t you try sorting your post into categories? Like this
About me
information about you, age, personality, etc
(Optional) Terms and conditions before hiring
information about you, age, personality, etc
Showcase
showcase your proudest work, recent work, etc
Payment
input all about payment, ie. what affects the prices, pricing list, preferred payment methods
Schedule(Recommend to have)
availability, how many hours are you available a day
Contact
how do we contact you? ie. discord, twitter, devforum