Horror game Menu (playtest+feedback)

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Hello people. Actually I made this really sick song on my guitar and thats how I ended up here.

So, I have tried to create a menu for a single-player horror game. It has 3 animated characters, music and Play button (which does not work obviously).

So the story is kind of like this : The guy dies and his spirit is playing the guitar i guess, and its a crime scene. So sorry my english is very bad.

Link : InquityMenu - Roblox

Please playtest and feedback. Thankyou.

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Looks great! I like the song! the animation and effects are great too! Keep up the great work!

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Thank you for the kind words :+1:

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Adding a loading screen would be a good idea.
The room needs a bit more detail,
the textures are somewhat off putting to me but that’s my personal preference.
Camera movement should be slowed.
^ More detail allows for it’s strange movements to look natural.
At point camera clips through officers head.

Love the work tho! nice to see new spooky content

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Thank you for the detailed feedback. I’ll keep that in mind.

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Hey there. I actually fixed all the issues you said.

-details
-camera movement
-loading screen
-camera through officer

I would like you to playtest now and give feedback again if you don’t mind. Thankyou.

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+ Loading screen is epic! (I love the tip ehe)
+ The camera movement is way more comfortable and pretty.
- The room still looks super barren in my opinion.

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let’s take a moment to appreciate how his face is merged with the guitar.

All in all it’s a pretty good title screen for a game!

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