How can I improve on my Game?

Hi! I created a group game recently and I’m pretty proud of what I did.

https://www.roblox.com/games/8151744472/Lava-Parkour

But the problem is that after checking it more than three times, I’m still not sure if it’s good enough. Can give feedback and suggestions on how I can improve?

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Maybe add more decoration than just clouds and parts, also the water doesn’t look like lava, and also there is nothing that really makes the game stand out from the other games.

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I understand, and now that I think about it, it probably looks a bit plain after all.

But what can I do for decoration?

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You could add more particles, like to the lava and spawn pads. You can also change the parts too small islands or just add a little design. Also if you could change the clouds and make them move that would make it more alive.

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That sounds good. I’ll try it.

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