How can i improve this build?

Quick note: i am absolutely terrible with level design, so i am in need of some criticism.

I am trying to make a cart ride game, but i struggle with how to physically build the levels, this image you see here is the station. But it feels as if something is off.



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From what I can see, you’ve already done a pretty decent job for the foundations.

Personally, if I were to critique this I’d say that you should add some more foliage around the edges as it seems that it looks quite barren around the station.

Adding more barrels or boxes around could also very well show a bit more detail and perhaps have a few decorative cards or rails posted near the tracks similar to supplies or depots. Just experiment and see what works well!

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Yeah so… the general idea: the foreground and background has no obvious difference. You might consider adding more things to background of the area. Add up until the point where there is a clear distinction between those two.

just thought i would update everyone, this is how it currently looks, i really like it.

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