How can I improve?

I’m a pretty new builder, I’m still learning the ropes. It would be great to get some feedback.
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You could start adding details to your builds and furnishing the buildings, also your builds are pretty awesome for a beginner!

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Thanks, i’ll work on adding more details. Thanks.

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The build looks good as a beginner do you mind explaining or adding more information in your post what you created so it could give us a better understanding on what you’re trying to achieve as for the feedback. As mentioned above, I highly recommend placing a few objects in the main area such as trees or shrubs something to give the ground more life.

Without having a good understanding on what your going for, I immediately think your going for some type of shop or abandoned building placed in the middle of the mountains. Could you possibly upload your picture directly to the forum instead of a link.

Anyway, I would recommend adding more detail to the terrain itself. Right now, it’s kind of just plain looking mountains and elevation terrain. Consider placing a few different angled trees with branches sized differently don’t make everything the same color the ceiling area could be filled with pipes and hanging chandelier just to make it pop more.

The fact that the ceiling is wood material if I’m not mistaken doesn’t match with the setting. To give off a very realistic feel or vibe if you’re going for that, I would recommend placing a door and environment features maybe make the mountains a bit smooth so it doesn’t clutter the building

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The celling is metal. I’m tryna make a elevator type of spawn where the player steps in the elevator. and is then TPed into the game.

If i’m understanding your response correctly. Are you talking about the building or the hexagon spawn point in the middle of the terrain? If so, I know what you’re trying to achieve, if you’re going for that type of style, try to place some railing around the area, giving it support so players won’t fall or jump of it adding maybe metal material would match with the environment.

Consider maybe adding some soothing music while it spawn them into the actual game, having the object and environment empty would give the game a boring feel. Or add other objects connected to the railing and objects to make the theme pop. Placing a few objects would improve the type of spawn you currently going for.

If I’m not mistaken if this is the elevator may you possibly take a screenshot of it up close so we can get a good look at everything.

Structually it looks really nice but it has a huge lack of detail.

I’ll have my sound designer make some music and I will add some more railings. Here is the elevator.