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I recently made a banner with a logo for my upcoming project. This is supposed to hang on walls in the game while in the 光を落とした者 Stronghold. Any feedback for it?

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EDIT I JUST REALIZED THIS LOOKS LIKE KKK

edit edit no it doesn’t, earth to you.

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The letters have a shadows while the design doesn’t
It is kinda plain to be honest

Touch it up and it will be better
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Taking off the “WATERMARK” text would be a start.

Jokes aside, the text is very small for anyone to read purposefully. Keeping it to one or a few characters which are much bigger in a prominent location, say in the middle of the symbol or directly below/above it would make more sense as a banner and be more meaningful imo. I like the color choices and symbol though and I think it could make for a really good-looking banner.

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The text is too long and the icon isn’t eye-catching enough.