Hello, this is my first post. This is also my very first build that I am showing publicly!
I use Studio Essentials’ polygon tool for building usually.
Screenshots:
What do you guys think of it?
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Looks good! Great design and fresh look.
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This looks rather nice for your first public build! Definitely fits the cartoony style.
The lobby seems great! It would be nice if you gave context on what the game is about, so you can add specific details depending on the type of game you’re making.
From what I’m seeing so far though:
- The trees can use some work, as they seem very rough for low poly. Perhaps making the bark smaller and the leaves smoother can help.
- That log in the middle of the map looks out of place, and doesn’t really look like a log. It looks more like a wooden stake.
- The particle effects for the chimney look unusual as well, I’m not sure what they’re suppose to be, as they look like eyes. Try changing it to either smoke particles or different variants of smoke.
- The hills in the background seem low as well, you should try raising them a bit and smooth them out.
Other than that, this is pretty great for your first public build, you should be proud it! 
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To answer your question, the lobby is for a game I am working on called House of Hilarity, inspired by Jackbox Games.
Also, the log is kind of like a bench that you can sit on. I’m planning on making it a bench later.
Thanks for the feedback!