How is my sword?

I made this in the span of a few hours. It isn’t the best of my work but I think its decent. if u have any tips and opinions you can always tell me!

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Sorry if the video is lagging, I have a lot of stuff running in the background

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It looks really good but I think the audio could be a little better. It seems to be off in some areas.

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Looks neat, but the cuts are a bit jarring, i recommend keeping the camera on one half of the character’s side so the character will always be on the left/right side of the screen.

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I’ve thought of that before, but what I was going for required the character to be in the middle. Since this is a Black clover referenced attack.

I am fine with having the character in the middle of the screen,
The current order of positions of the Character Relative to the camera are:
Middle Right Middle Left Middle Right
And that makes it confusing to watch,
I recommend to go watch some cinematography tutorials

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