I know you guys aren’t my target audience but I need to see where it currently stands as it would help alot since i’m going to get ready to do a test sponsor with it
- Pretty clean!
- I’d click it!
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It looks pretty good, but I think the arms are little to far maybe you could make the arms crossed ? Also can you show some gameplay if there is any and some of the ideas you currently have for it?
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i have no idea what the game is about or what KOTH means, so i cant judge
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King Of The Hill, I thought that was pretty obvious by the thumbnail…
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it wasn’t obvious for me, so you should probably make it say King of the Hill instead. maybe put a little crown on the guy’s head, too.
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Well the game title will be the acronym spelled out so I thought just having KOTH would make look cleaner and less redundant. but thank you I understand
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It would be nice if the noob at the top of the hill was holding a weapon or something.
Other than that, great thumbnail!
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Yeah so basically in the game there is no weapons you only use your fists so thats why I gave him that pose, also thank you very much for the feedback
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in that case, i would make the noobs on the stairs fighting or something
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Well so the gameplay is actually very simple, so basically it’s a king of the hill with just a few extra elements so basically
There isn’t any rounds so players can just touch a part and get spawned at the bottom of the hill
They can be spawned randomly anywhere where you see red in the screenshot including the other two sides aswell
The players also have a damage percentage so, players can’t really die in the game only can be hit which increases their damage percentage, and as it increases it makes the knockback they experience more, and it also makes them in a ragdoll state for longer aswell (think of like the percentage in super smash bros)
And then of course when you’re ontop of the hill your time on the hill increases and you get a crown over your head, until your knocked off by another player
But yeah I wanted to create a super simple game with some unique elements just gonna test sponsoring it and see how players react too it, wish me luck 
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Its good and all but with thumbnails I should be able to understand what the games about more.
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It is bland, typically when making thumbnails you would want to exaggerate something. Add a crown at the top make KOTH bigger, and a different color to make it POP. The Scene itself is overall bland and could use a touchup. I will give you a reworked scene as an example later.
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I’m currently in the process of doing a test sponsor and these are the stats for the campaign right now, I think I started late last night @BoxedOutBob
its pretty good, one thing i will say is the arms of the top guy is uhh, odd. also i think it needs a few more things like a crown on the top guy
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The characters stepping up have no lighting. You should add some lighting around the edges in these areas
Maybe even adding a sun right behind the one at the top of the stairs would look good. Or even anywhere else in the photo, a sun would make it look better.
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Yeah they have transparent black highlights on them the point was to make the guy on top of the hill be the focus point if that makes sense it was intentional
I had no idea what the game was about until I read the replies, I think there should be an element describing what do you do in the game, maybye a crown on the character on the top’s head? But overall, it looks pretty good!
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How do you plan to handle teaming?
If someone is trying to help their friend win a lot of matches, they can just get a whole group of friends to team up and target the random players. Basically allowing their freind to win.
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Well I mean that’s like asking any FFA fighting game on roblox that question, it just isnt possible and I really dont think it’ll be an issue LOL
But yeah the sponsor i’ve been doing has been performing extremely well and players are really liking the game and clicking on the thumbnail, I’m gonna wait until tomorrow so I can check the in depth analytics while im waiting im gonna just try to add features here and there
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I mean if you plan to add any other game modes. Maybe a team mode would be a good suit for this, if someone wants to play with a group specifically. Like if there is more reds than blues on the top of the hill, red wins, etc.
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