How should I continue this?

uh I tried to make some sort of song idk

I’m wondering how I should continue this :thinking:

(Ignore the last second of the second one)

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yea i want to see the bass drop ( sounds good overall) ( it may be repetitive, but really depends where it would be used and which scenario

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Any ideas on how to flip over the repetitiveness?

I want to keep the Riff at the Start and End of the Composition, but I want to have something slightly different like variations of the Riff.

im not a composer but the sound that looks like a ‘‘punch’’ is very repetitive… Really hard to explain, since musics are really hard to judge, and only the composer is able to understand what’s going on

for example

[0 ~~ 11 Second] looks out of sync with high beats (punchs i say)
but [ 11 ~~ end seconds] looks nice but

Start slows and simple > gets some drums > more instruments or some harmony

something like that i guess, sorry if i can’t help enough

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i’m using audacity (thinking to get a real good software to edit)
i did a small change , this is how it went:

(note that i dind’t added anything) ( the song has the same beats and stuff)

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I think I see what you mean by the punch now.

So, you think I should lower the number of times that it comes up? (I noticed it does sound kind of repetitive)

This seems very abstract and atonal. Was there any conscious decisions behind these work?

A bit confused about your question…

To be honest, I just made something that sound good, It took hours to come up with something though