How to improve upon this scene? Looking for constructive criticism & advice!

Greetings,

I am attempting to master a certain style. Sort of half low poly half cartoony, with the goal of creating colorful, tranquil environments that you might find in cartoons or children’s books. This is what i got so far. Any criticism or suggestions are welcome.

Thank you for your time

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This is quite lovely! Everything is so well detailed, nice job!

The only thing that I can think of that would improve this would be making the scene autumn. When people see a pumpkin patch and the colors of the bridges, it makes them think of autumn. Try switching all the leaves and grass to autumn colors and see if it’s better.

Also, if you aren’t going to switch to autumn, change the bridge colors to look more like wood, since the area has a village and farm theme.

first off, thank you

secondly, those are actually carrots sticking out of the dirt xD
I feel like the truly idyllic scene is always in spring, when everything is bright and fragrant
now that i think about it you might be right about the bridges. They are actually inspired by traditional Japanese bridges, that often feature the red color but this scene has nothing to do with japan or even Asia. What colors would you suggest?

Try brown, to make the bridges consistent, you should make them look like wood.

I really like then design and idea. But it could really help with some better lighting and/or post processing.

Quite nicely done! I am not a fan of Low-poly building, but it looks pretty nice!

The only thing I would change is the wheat, and make it more low-poly.

The wheat is actually a particle effect xD But i guess i could make a mesh for it like for the other vegetables

well this is just roblox studio screenshot. What did you have in mind?