How would i make this better

Hi, im currently working on a horror game. There is this power outage scene that happens


The problem is that it doesnt look right and sound right. How would you do it?

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add some electric spark sound effects, and maybe spark particles coming out of the lights above

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I think it could use a sudden “boom” sound to make it a bit more dramatic. Not an explosion sound if you know what I’m talking about.

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Like this?

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Yeah, that’s what I’m looking for. I think making it a little bit louder and longer than the spark effect would be best though.

add a few flashes before it power out completly, like a half screwed lightbulb

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like this?

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oh yeah, much better

more of a nickpick but the bright flash before the light shuts down is a bit too bright for my liking


This looks good. You should add some sparks and flashes when it happens.

Looks good!

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Great but you could definitely work on that building!

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What should i do to make it better

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Well what are you going for? Is this a horror game. If so I see you already added wall, floor, and ceiling textures but let’s make them 3D. You can add high wall trims or just basic floor trims to really give the look of a hotel or a hallway (what I think you’re going for).

You could also fix up those light models as they don’t really fit a corridor/hallway/hotel, exchange them for a more traditional office ceiling light with metal trims and a grate texture. As well you could also add decore such as poster, paintings, or a simple vase that breaks when a monster comes to attack you lol.

I see that there is a bathroom but I cant really see anything that looks to be changing as it looks pretty nice :slight_smile: :+1:

If you give me a whole tour of this building I could give you ideas on what to change or add.

Overall a lot of your models could be changed or edited, I give you a 5/10!
Have a nice day.

im going for a 90s office theme