It looks good ! But I think you should make lightning slightly lower .
Hi. It’s pretty fair for a first. You could add more details to it like to the ceiling lights. You should add chairs to the table. The windows are coming out wayyy too much and are clunky. the windows ahead are on a different level as well
It looks nice for a first low-poly build. But darn the lighting is really intense.
Hello Developer! Considering that this is your first low-poly build, i can say that it is impressing. In my opinion, i think the windows are abit too close to each other. Also, some things blends in with your colours for example the ice cream blends in with your window. Maybe you can improve on the colours. Overall, this is a good build!
Do you mind taking screenshots of the exterior of the building instead of showing just the interior? I’m assuming the outside building isn’t properly finished.
The structure looks good I would recommend changing the color of the square tiles maybe go for something like black, all white or grey mixed with different colors to see whatever suits your liking.
The ceiling color looks a little odd, maybe include a different color or square tiles or a similar design that will match the building include, decorations and ceiling lighting (hanging) if this is an ice cream shop try including something that has a resemblance of that type of building.
Like the color scheme and use of colors all it needs is some decorations and art to make it pop best of luck: