How's this design doc?

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I’m making a design doc for my game and wondering if I hit all of the necessary pointers, if there’s anything else that should be added, or if there’s anything that I got wrong. Any suggestions?

https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/14g89bSDpREANbcVamgSRNx4FTgSRcHFcgxInUSAJ0tk/edit?usp=sharing

2

I think this doc looks well made but I really feel like you should just make the background darker. If not on the first slide atleast on the ones later

3

Make it darker for readability?

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Definitely. Other than that it seems great!