Hey all, I am trying to make a nice starting screen for my project. What do you all think? How could I improve? It is my first real attempt at something more attractive than just a screen GUI. All feedback is appreciated.
P.S. if anyone has name ideas lemme know, lol
I honestly really think your starting screen is cool.
The colors match on the GUI buttons and the ship. In addition, the camera angle looks perfect. I love the ship itself and with the GUIs it looks wonderful. Great work!
I really appreciate that! I do not have much of a creative imagination so this was definitely a shot in the dark. Thank you!
I like it! My only suggestion for this is to change the text color because I feel like it would be easier to read if it were a white color. Black plays tricks with my mind sometimes and it makes it harder to read for me.
Thanks for your reply.
I tried that actually, but I really like the black with gold outline to match the ship and its trim. The white just looked blurry compared to this one. I will definitely play around with it a bit more and see if I can find a happy medium!
https://gyazo.com/bafee60b134ebc08ed4ac10d42c35e72
Maybe add a bit of camera wobble since it is placed in the water; and maybe a different skybox.
That’s a great idea with the wobble, I’ll see if I can figure that out.
I plan to make it super dark anyways so only stars and potentially a moon will be visible.
Thanks!
It looks good, I just suggest maybe the gold outline for the text be a little less thin because it looks a bit messy as some parts of the gold outline are covered.
I am not 100% on what you mean. If it is what I think, it’s because the uploads quality isn’t the greatest. It’s much crisper in actual Roblox. I don’t have it published but if it’d be easier to show then I’d be happy to do it.
I like it.
The camera is perfect in it’s current location.
Good quality and the water gives a vibe of an horror game.
Good job!