its for a game, iam not a Builder actualy iam mostly an GUI-Designer / Scripter.
what you’all think about it? i hope you like it 
its for a game, iam not a Builder actualy iam mostly an GUI-Designer / Scripter.
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The map looks great, but there’s not enough detail, and something is missing. I’m a builder myself, and I’ve been doing this for over 3 years, and I’m really good at it. I can help you with the map if you need it!
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Can’t really give advice without knowing the style you’re going for.
That being said, it feels bland and partially hurts my eyes to look at due to how bright everything is. I doubt this will be an issue if you’re marketing your game towards children however. Perhaps you could make the regular grass darker or the bushes mesh darker to form some colour co-ordination?
It should be a Game where you get loot Drops and sell the loot getting from, and then if you are lucky you get good loot from the lootboxes and can get a lot of money from them
I know there is something missing i would like to build an Map for an RNG Lootdrop game with 8 plots but thats harder then expected bc iam not a builder at all.
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That’s right, I can help you with that if you need it.
well ill take your help with pleasure
TEXTURES:
-The grass needs a texture
-The hedge needs a texture
-The stem needs a texture
-The leaves needs a texture
-etc.
Everything needs a texture, instead of just smoothplastic/ plastic
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Shi looks like the inflatable trees from Lorax 
But yeah, you did try your best, and I would say, that your work was made professionally.
8.5/10
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thank you so much, i spend a lot of time in this
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there is something called “Low-Poly” a lot of games are Textureless
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I simply disagree with this, this is just not true at all
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This looks like it got stuck in the Adopt Me! era back in like 2020. It looks really flat and boring, not very interesting to look at.
Fits the theme for what is essentially a gambling game though.
6.5/10
It gets the job done, but looks too flat and boring.
I feel like what really kills this are those bushes (I think they’re bushes)
You could either add a texture to it or make them look lumpy like how actual photos of bushes look.
Honestly if you add a texture to the bushes you’d have to add a texture to basically everything else or the bushes would clash with everything else, so I recommend doing the latter.
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