I have made a Game Could some one give me a feedback on it…
Game link here
if the game is nice like and favorite it would really help me out…
thanks for reading.
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The thumbnail doesn’t really represent what the game is about. There is just a couple snowmen as the thumbnail.
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It was kinda boring it took like 10 minutes just to get to a regular speed.
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The scripting is good, the GUI design is ugly, try making it a little bit more friendly, and out of a 2001 website feel. Make it more cartoony. A smaller feedback would be to make the snow men out of smooth plastic, to achieve that cartoony look. Lastly, maybe add some stuff in the circle, since it’s christmas themes right now, then try adding presents, a big tree maybe? And floor decorations. Otherwise it’s a good start.
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So here is the list:
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Avoid making game passes that give admin powers or such; they can drop your player count very easily, as if someone buys it, they can abuse it and make other people leave the game from the annoyance. -
Avoid these game titles; instead, set the game title to “God Of Speed”. -
Make your text on your game icon more readable. -
Some parts of your UI are too large; consider making them smaller. -
The button margin is inconsistent; consider making it consistent.
In general, UI needs to be improved, as well as considering adding more stuff into the game because it gets very boring, there is nothing really to do besides walking. If you improve those things, you can make a decent game; otherwise, happy coding 
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would you help me make the map cool? so it can be nice to play.
Sorry, I have other things to do and I am not here to make your game 
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Then work hard on it, keep updating it and improve your skills, and one day you will get to 1 million visits; nothing falls from the sky, if you work hard enough, your hard work will pay off one day .
For future posts, please don’t ask people to make your game. The category you posted in is for getting feedback on your creations. If you want to hire someone post in #collaboration:recruitment category instead. I hope it helped 
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The game looks like a quick cash-grab if I’m being completely honest. First of all, your thumbnail for the game is very unappealing and is not very relevant to the game itself; the same can be said for the GUIs in-game as their positioning and style needs a lot of improvement. I’d suggest hiring someone who is open for commissions to help you with the art aspect.
As for the scripting, in itself, it’s good. You have working DataStores and a Mainframe that doesn’t let the game down in terms of performance. However, every time I reset I see a loading screen GUI, and I don’t receive that when I join. Don’t add a loading screen just because other games have it, instead use it for its intended use and only display it whilst the player is actually loading in.
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ok thank you for your feedback 
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ye but i dont have robux or money to hire some one 
i dont have some good programmer
Neither I did. I started with absolutely nothing, just straight 0 Robux. I kept learning and practicing, after so much hard work I got myself decent amount of Robux; neither I didn’t spent a single cent on Robux .
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coool ur lucky i dont understand programming 
It’s not about luck; it’s not like someone just went up to my house and left 1 million Robux at my door; instead of luck I worked very hard and I still do and it pays off.
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I understand what you mean, but it probably represents a winter update, or a map showcase for winter.
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