I made a song, what do you think?

I used LMMS to make it, and tried to do it in C. I have made other songs previously, but none that were good enough to post here.

Personally, i think the second half sounds rather repetitive…

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It seems pretty good, although in my opinion the beginning sounded a little weird. The stops before the other instrument came in on the scale seemed like the worst part, but good job!

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Yeah, i just noticed those pauses, maybe if the chords were a quarter rather than a eighth there wouldn’t be such awkward silence.

the start of the song, somehow suits to a pixel game, [entering in a new town]
after some time the theme just kicks in

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It’s decent, the first part’s pauses are way too long.
Now, I’m not a composer or anything, but the theme is pretty cool.

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I think you need to make the puses at the begining shorter but I do like how the beats that start at about 29 seconds sound. Around 1:52 or so there is a du da du I think mabye make it instead of what sounds like a tripplet make it an 8th note it just sounds out of place/on acsident. Other than that it is a great song nice work! This is a true jam. (I am in band sorry about the paragraph)

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It is cool I think the bass is good to.

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nice but the chords at the start are abrupt and end too fast, have them stretch until right before next one plays. the beat is really nice, and makes for a nice tower of hell esque repeating type happy lofi song.

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Maybe make a bit of sound when the pauses are happening in the middle, also what’s LMMS? I’m thinking about getting into music like my father.

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cool music, although what is this music for?

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Nothing really, i made it for fun / to get better at music

It’s good but the starting sounded a little weird, but overall, it was a nice song

it sounds nice, I like how you change each peace just before it starts to get repetative.