This is my first creations medival building, and I want to make a portfolio as a builder but I don’t know if my building is good.So I need feedback for my building.
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Hey there, XxxJohndie.
I really love your designs here and the fact that this is your first attempt at this art style is honestly mind-blowing. Great job taking your time with the details. Adding small elements such as the canopy over the window goes a long way.
If I had to offer any sort of constructive criticism here I would say that the buildings are a bit too busy. There is so much going on that it becomes a tad overwhelming. I would try to limit your texture use to 2-3 well contrasting materials.
All in all, great build. Super impressive for your first time building in this style.
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Hi, Thanks for the Feedback i will try to remake it Again.
I absolutely was not insinuating it needed to be re-made. Simply adjusted in it’s appearance. I think the physical structures themselves are great.
I mean by just turning a little part into a texture.
I wouldn’t remake it. If you plan is to make a portfolio I think all styles, types of builds would only add to that portfolio. I like it and so will many who end up seeing your completed portfolio, oh maybe we never complete our portfolios. Nice job!
tbh, it looks awesome! However, Here are a few suggestions
- make the roof look slightly more proportioned and slightly more realistic ( for the second build)
- for the first build, make the tent area on the right side of the building slightly more stretched out. Also, you might want to stretch the tent.
- for the first build, there are those blue windows. On top of that is wood planks. Make the wood planks larger (meaning less wood planks)
- for the second build, there’s that area of the building which pops out. make that pop out less and it’ll look fine.
Other than that, this is probably one of the best builds I’ve seen today! Awesome job!
You’re building style and appearance looks beautiful and intriguing. Starting a portfolio is a great way to improve your building skills.
@XxxJohndie :v…
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who are you speaking to? please @ the user lol
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Greetings XxxJohndie! This building is very awesome! Keep up the great work! You are a talented player.
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Nice work on detail! Never seen something so amazing!
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They do look very nice, nice attention to detail.
Hi there! 
I absolutely love this style that you went for! It is really appealing as it shows off the element of “lego”. However, on the first one I would work on the stairs leading up the door as they are a SmoothPlastic rather than concrete which makes it look a bit out of place.
However, on the second build and besides from the stairs it is a fantastic design! Keep up the great work and continue posting your builds for feedback as it really helps!
