I need feedback on an abilty i made

Hey i made this ability its spinjitzu from a show called LEGO Ninjago! i tried making it simmilar to the show but in the same time ading my own things any tips on ho i can make it look better or any feedback appreciated!

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nice!

good vfx, and the whole ability looked pretty smooth. would be another step up with some added sfx.

you have a cool startup to get into the ability, but to get out of it, it kind of just cuts with no transition. i would like to see the transformation both in and out!

maybe considering having a small PointLight to illuminate the environment while in this ability.

very cool though!

thanks this is an older version so theres already sfx but thanks for the ideas ill add them

Very nice ability indeed!

Something you could add besides the VFX is another variant of the move, Sort of how The Strongest Battlegrounds has different variants for moves based on certain circumstances. Maybe if a enemy player is stuck in the tornado for a certain amount of time, the user kicks them in the face really hard, with some impact frames. This could also be a finisher.

Overall, good showcase!