I need feedback on my designs!

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HI! Recently i made some designs and I want feedback on them! here they are-

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Please tell me I can improve

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Looks good at first, looks very plastic though. I want you to do it in roblox studio or add more detail. tbh I love them! If i was a girl, i would wear your clothing. Really nice! Keep it up!

Thanks, Fusion

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I am not allowed to download Roblox studio. (:sob:) but i use Pixlr E: Free Advanced Photo Editor & Image Editing Tool | Pixlr instead which is good

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On the first shirt, the shading goes onto the display. The design on it looks like something I’ve seen on the internet. The pants seem fine, but the shading is all over the place. For this design, you should improve on designing your own textures and finding different shading techniques.

The second one; the crop and pants are too far from each other. It looks very ‘plastic’ and the crop, I can see you got a texture from a reference image because the texture is uneven.

Main points:
Shading
Create your own textures

PM me for further help

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is this better?

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Yes, slightly. Keep in mind, just keep practicing on making your own textures instead of copying and pasting and learn shading!

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Its fine, But i recommend extending! I am excited to see more clothing!

Thanks, Fusion