I Am doing a gfx for a upcoming game. the character on the gfx is a placeholder btw.
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It looks impressive!
Though, there’s some cracks in the limbs.
A simple smear tool should fix the problem however.
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Boo! 
I would suggest learning how to use HDRIs. This will help your backgrounds improve. Having a basic background of a galaxy is not going to cut it. Click here for a video on HDRIs. Click here for a HDRI website.
Blurring out the eyes is a bold move and I’m not sure why you would want that, even if the character is a placeholder.
Click here to learn how to rig. Rigging is an easier way to bend your character’s limbs. Also, never use R15 to animate with. There are so many reasons not to, the biggest being the limbs are ‘broken’ or apart from each other. This is not a happy sighting.
Also, stay away from that Roblox package. It does not look normal to use what ever package that is. It looks bad in a game and looks bad on GFX. Make the character larger.
To sum this all up, change the background, make the character lager, miscellanies things on the side.
Hope this helps!
Sincerely,
FallinqSnowFlake 
hey, thanks for the feedback. but i dont use blender to make this. i use Cinema4D
Everything stated in that post is still relevant for Cinema4D, except the links. There are multiple tutorials for Cinema4D.
This includes: HDRIs and rigging.
Hope this clears things up.
Sincerely,
FallinqSnowFlake
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ok, thanks again.
oh and
my characters only look good in that package.
You asked for feedback, so that is what I gave you. You do not have to respond to my feedback, you can just merely ignore everything in that post if you wish to. This was created based upon my opinions and first looks. If you feel different, please, I do not really need to know about your opinions. My apologies for not making that clear.
Sincerely,
FallinqSnowFlake
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I think it looks really good. Nice job!
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I think it looks very nice!
Maybe try to add some platform for the character to stand on, or just them floating is fine if it’s a space theme you’re going for.
Also, cropping the image so it doesn’t look as empty and wide.
Good work!